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Simon’s IELTS Writing Task 1
Question types
Numbers
Numbers
Describe
Compare
Changes/trends
Line graph
Bar chart
Pie chart
Table
Diagram-comparing
Diagram-process
Essay structure (4 paragraphs )
Introduction
One sentence : Paraphrase the question
Overview
2 sentences :The main , general things
Details
Details
3+4: Why 2 paragraphs ?
This makes you organize or ‘group’ the information better
(or put the overview at the end)
No conclusion!!
Line graph ( Line graph show numbers changing over a period of time )
You will not see a graph with only one line .
You will almost definitely see 2/3/4/5 lines.
Your job is to compare the lines , not describe them separately.
Frist , make a very general comparison .( Summary / overview paragraph )
Second , compare the lines at specific point . (‘details’ paragraphs )
For example :4 lines
You can’t describe everything
Write at least one thing about each line.
你看不到只有一条线的图形。
你会看到2/3/4/5条线。
你要对这些线条进行比较,而不是单独描述它们。
首先,做一个非常一般的比较。(总结/概述段落)
第二,比较这些线条的特定的节点。(‘细节’段落)
Paragraph 1 : Introduction
The graph below shows electricity production (in terawatt hours ) in France between 1980 and 2012 .
改写:The line graph compares the amount of electricity produced in France using four differdent sources of power over a period of 32 years.
这个折线图比较了法国在32年间使用四种不同电源的发电量。
Paragraph 2 :Overview—2 sentences , 2 main points.
It is clear that nuclear power was by far the most important means of electricity generation over the period shown . renewables provided the lowest amount of electricity in each year.
很明显,在所示期间,核能是迄今为止最重要的发电方式,可再生能源每年提供的电力量最低。
Paragraph 3 : Detail — 2 paragraphs , compare the lines
In 1980 , thermal power stations were the main source of electricity in France, generating around 120 terawatt hours of power . Nuclear and hydroelectric power stations produced just under 75 terawatt hours of electricity each, and renewables provided a negligible amount . Just one year later , nuclear power overtook thermal power as the primary sourc
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