托福写作强化.ppt

TOEFL WRITING;综合写作;题型讲解;综合写作;近年来，韩剧?风靡大江南北，尤其在女性观众中大受欢迎。然而， 看韩剧对女性智商，情商，以及家庭生活来说害处很多。 第一. 女性过多看韩剧会导致智商下降。因为韩剧大多叙事简单，观;头段 - Thesis Statement ;READING;独立写作;Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? ;It is important for families have meals together regularly. ;头段 ;Young people today are more likely to help others than young people in the past. ;Second, the prevalence of the Internet is also a reason why young people today are less likely to help others. Why is this so? Today adolescents spend so much time searching and receiving information on the Internet, and some of the information is not only widely spread but also profoundly in?uential to youngsters. For example, 3 years ago this piece of news was all the rage online: an old granny fell down when she was crossing the road. A nice young man saw her falling, ran towards her and tried to pull her up. However, the granny refused him and cried out all of a sudden, claiming that it was this young man who pushed her down. She even asked for a;BUT THERE ARE OTHER WAYS;There are certain considerations or factors that everyone takes into account in a relationship. People may look for honesty, altruism, understanding, loyalty, being thoughtful etc! Everyone would more or less wish that the person she is dealing with has some of these virtues above. Putting them in an order according to their importance, however, can be very subjective and relative. ;In any relationship of mine, I would wish that ?rst of all, the person;In this response the writer ?rst approaches the topic by underscoring that a number of character traits are important to a relationship. The writer then e?ectively;BOOKS / WEBSITES YOU NEED; ;SCORE RUBRICS;;Raw Score;目标 ;格式！;AmE or BrE?;AmE or BrE?;Scoring Criteria;评分标准;E?ectively addresses the topic and task ;AVOID REDUNDANCY;Language Use & Details;每个美国超级英雄的装扮都非常有特色。超人很有;食品有害儿童健康……炸;食品有害儿童健康……炸;Junk food is harmful to children’s health. French Fries have too much oil, which causes overweight a