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Word 第 第 PAGE 1 页 英语作文批改评语 　　英语作文批改评语1 一、 宏观性评价  1.整体印象类评语  Super！Excellent！Perfect！Wonderful！Fantastic！Marvelous！  采纳整体印象类评语对于起始阶段同学有较好激励作用，但若千篇一律使用此类评语，就会使同学无法正确熟悉自己写作水平，最终导致老师评语失去应有作用。  2.规范导知类评语  Beautiful.Clear. Wonderful.Good hand-writing.  You’re careful of using pronunciation.  Glad to see your improvement in handwriting.  I’m expecting clearer/more beautiful hand-writing from you next time. You’d better pay more attention to word order.  Better be more careful of your spelling.  It’s important to compose a graft beforehand.  3.情感调控类评语  I appreciate your handwriting.  You have a good knowledge of English proverbs.  You are quite aware of making meaningful sentences.  You are richer than others in collecting and using typical sentences and idioms.  I’m expecting greater progress from you in writing .Come on.  If you need my help,never hesitate to come to me.  警句：  Hard work leads to success.  Not to advance is to go back.  No one is without faults.  Keeping is harder than winning.Keep it up.  二、 微观写作技能方面评语  1.专项点拨类评语  It’s proper to use the proverb in Para.2 quite clever.  You are good at using attributive clauses in your writing.  The “struck” sentence is perfectly used.  You’d better use “third person” in the first para.  It’s good to use the past tense in your writing.  2.佳句观赏类评语  老师可以在句尾统一标注赞美性符号〔如E—Excellent〕或标识不同星级等。  What a wonderful sentence using “cover”.  It’s really clever of you to use this beautiful sentence.  The inverted sentence is well wtitten.  3.谋篇布局类评语  A good beginning.  A perfect ending.  Well-organized. Perfectly-expanded.  The first para. makes a good beginning.  The last para. makes a perfect ending.  All the points have been covered.  It’s clever of you to use a topic sentenc