高中英语教学课件：写作提升二.ppt

26.思想如同降落伞，如果不打开就不起作用。 27.人生如同洋葱，你一次剥一层，有时你会流泪。 28.食物之于身体，如同燃料之于发动机。 29.旅行者们已经爱上了的当地特产。他们不敢相信蕃茄大如苹果，而苹果看起来像棒球一樣大。 30.每当她的同学们得到更好的成绩或领取杰出成就的奖，Gwen是嫉妒到脸都发绿，俨然变成一双绿眼怪兽了! A mind is like a parachute. It doesn't work if it is not open. Life is like an onion; you peel it off one layer at a time, and sometimes you weep. Food is to the body as fuel is to the engine. The travellers have fallen in love with local produce. They cannot believe that the tomatoes are as big as apples, and the apples look like the size of baseballs. Gwen often becomes green with envy whenever her classmates receive better grades or awards for outstanding achievements, and she would turn into a green-eyed monster. 英语作文提升系列二 Travelling is very tiring. There were so many people visiting Mount Lu. I could see people taking photos everywhere. Having waited for several hours in a line, I could hardly take any step. Mount Lu is famous for her spectacular scenery, attracting countless tourists. Travelling is very tiring. There were so many people visiting Mount Lu. I could see people taking photos everywhere. Having waited for several hours in a line, I could hardly take any step. Mount Lu is famous for her spectacular scenery, attracting countless tourists. 作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散；而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅句型多样，句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明。 正确使用非谓语动词 原则一：用不定式作目的状语 When asked why he went there, he said he was sent there to be trained for a space flight. To master a foreign language, one must work hard at it. 原则二：用分词作伴随和方式状语（尤其是现在分词） They walked into the classroom talking and laughing. The professor went out of the lab, followed by a group of students. 原则三：用现在分词作结果状语和原因状语，个别特殊结构也用不定式 His uncle died, leaving him a lot of money. Not knowing his name, I found it hard to find him. It rained heavily, causing severe flooding in that place. He got there in a hurry only to find everybody gone. You are old enough to take care of yourself now. 原则四：非谓语动词作定语时，不定式表示动作将要发生，现在分词表示动作正在