2023届新高考英语写作之读后续写（入门版）.pptx

读后续写课程系列山东卷五步曲一个主题：故事的完整性（思路不要偏，不要天马行空的想象）两个关键：两端首句关键词三个衔接：情节之间的衔接，A-B-C-D 主要四个情节，情节越简单越好，推进要简洁四个细节：动作、心理、情感、环境五个注意：逻辑、时态、词汇、句式、书写文本分析引导文本分析引导CharactersBeginningIt got worse whenThe climax was whenHow will the problem be solved?梳理文本线索CharactersBeginningIt got worse whenThe climax was whenHow will the problem be solved?Jane and TomJane and Tom ________ with each other and Jane was so _______ that she _______ away.Jane walked on for quite a long time but ______ her way. Unfortunately, the ______ was beginning to fall.The next day, she heard the sound of a __________ but it didn’t find her.Maybe, with the help of her ________ blouse, Jane would be found.CharactersBeginningIt got worse whenThe climax was whenHow will the problem be solved?Jane and Tom quarreledJane and Tom ________ with each other and Jane was so _______ that she _______ away. walked angry lostJane walked on for quite a long time but ______ her way. Unfortunately, the ______ was beginning to fall. night helicopterThe next day, she heard the sound of a __________ but it didn’t find her. yellowMaybe, with the help of her ________ blouse, Jane would be found.FiguresBehaviorsCharacters and FeelingsJaneTom细品人物细节FiguresBehaviorsCharacters and FeelingsJane so angry that she walked awayhoping to see the lake, wanted very much to be with Tom and tell him how much she loved himShe cried, Help! confused, so tired, hungry and thirstyI’m going to find a better spot for us to camp, follow the sound, hoped it would lead her to the lake, should go to an open area and flag them bad-tempered, stubborn egretful r________ (后悔的) love Tom e______(渴望的) to come back to Tom ager cared s_________(害怕的)lever/smart/calm c__________(醒目的…), e____________(经验丰富的) xperiencedFiguresBehaviorsCharacters and FeelingsTomhad driven three hours to camp overnightstarted to quarrel loving camping e___________(有经验的) xperienced bad-tempered, stubborn梳理完文本线索以及人物细节后锁定一个主题rescue, love两个关键：But no more helicopters came and it was dark….It was daybreak