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中考英语书面表达 写作指导 brainstorm My Father Age Personality Apperances Job Hobbies The Man’s Lies (2013山东聊城中考)在父亲节（6月16日）来临之际，请你根据下表提供的信息，写一篇以“My Father”为题的英语作文，介绍其大体情况，并谈谈你对“父亲”的评价。 ? ?年龄 ? ? 40岁 ? ?外貌 ? ? 又高又胖，短头发，大眼睛 ? ?职业 ? ? 数学教师（工作努力，上课活泼生动，深受学生喜爱） ? ?性格 ? ? 诚实，善良 ? ?爱好 ? ? 打乒乓球 【注意】1. 字数：80左右。 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 认真审题，找出文章要表达的中心。 写作第一步 审 用简单的句子或短语列出文章要点。 列 写作第二步 加 加首尾，使结构完整。 可以采取总分总结构或者总分结构，开头或结尾的句子应注意简洁，漂亮。 写作第三步： 连 恰当运用关联词句，使得文章层次清晰，各个部分衔接自然。 写作第四步： 美 选好词句，美化文章。在有把握的情况下展示自己的语言功底。 写作第五步： 书面表达写作技巧 审 列 加 连 美 书写美观、大方、清楚； 时态、人称、大小写及标点运用准确无误； 句子连贯完整，恰当使用连接词； 能够部分或少量使用复合句。 My father is a 40-year-old math teacher. He is tall and fat with short hair and big eyes. He always works hard. His class is lively and interesting and is deeply loved by his students.? My father is an honest and kind man. He often helps other children and me with our math.?My father’s hobby is playing table tennis. We often play table tennis together at weekends. My father is not only the sweetest one in the world but also the greatest one. I have learned a lot from him. I love my father very much.? 健康很重要。在学习和工作的压力日趋增大的今天，会休息的人才会有健康的身体。人们是如何度过假期的呢？国际健康组织对此作了一次调查，右图是他们此次的调查结果。根据你所得的信息，请为国际健康组织写一篇完整的调查报告,并提倡大家进行假日休闲。 审 travel stay at home visit friends or parents work 根据以下关键词及图表用简单的句子列出文章的要点 如何度假 调查报告 倡议假日休闲 stay at home work visit friends or parents travel A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Enjoy your vacation. 列 How do people spend their vacation? We made a survey and here is our survey report. A lot of people travel . Some people stay at home. They watch TV or surf the Internet. Some other people visit friends or parents. A few people work. Come and enjoy your vacation. The people who relax will work well. 1.表示并列或递进: and, as well as, both…and, not only…but also, neither…nor; 2.表示选择: or, either…or; 3.表示转折: but, however, though, after all, 4.表示因果: because, so 5.表示条件: