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科技英语写作风格一、正确使用英语Tips使用简单陈述句杜绝悬垂修饰语一、正确使用英语Tips使用简单陈述句杜绝悬垂修饰语悬垂结构 Dangling Element的定义一般在一个句子中,修饰语必须清楚地修饰句中某个词或短语,如果它不修饰句中的任何成分,而处于悬浮状态,这样的修饰语即为悬垂结构.悬垂结构的理解通常以一个短语或隐含的从句完成形容词的功能，但在句中没有修饰的成分或修饰对象搞错，造成句首的短语与后面句子的逻辑关系混乱不清．例如：At the age of ten, my grandfather died.这句中”at the age of ten”只点出十岁时,但没有说明” 谁”十岁时．一、正确使用英语由 悬垂结构 造成的错误(1)悬垂分词?误：Being Sunday, they went for a picnic.正：It being Sunday, they went for a picnic.正：As it was Sunday, they went for a picnic.(2)悬垂不定式?误：To swim properly, a course of instruction was necessary.正：To swim properly, one needs a course of instruction.(3)悬垂简式从句?误：When a middle school student, his parents were very strict with him.正：When he was a middle school student, his parents were very strict with him.一、正确使用英语由 悬垂结构 造成的错误(1)悬垂分词?误：Being Sunday, they went for a picnic.正：It being Sunday, they went for a picnic.正：As it was Sunday, they went for a picnic.(2)悬垂不定式?误：To swim properly, a course of instruction was necessary.正：To swim properly, one needs a course of instruction.(3)悬垂简式从句?误：When a middle school student, his parents were very strict with him.正：When he was a middle school student, his parents were very strict with him.一、正确使用英语1.2成功写作十诫代词要与先行词保持一致要重视字母大小写（如you and I）句尾不要用介词动词要与主语保持一致不要使用双重否定一、正确使用英语1.2成功写作十诫代词要与先行词保持一致要重视字母大小写（如you and I）句尾不要用介词动词要与主语保持一致不要使用双重否定一、正确使用英语1.2成功写作十诫代词要与先行词保持一致要重视字母大小写（如you and I）句尾不要用介词动词要与主语保持一致不要使用双重否定不要使用分离不定式一、正确使用英语1.2成功写作十诫在英语语法中，动词不定式通过用to+动词的形式，去表示“打算”“计划”“希望”“将要做某事”等表示未来。例如：If you expect to eventually succeed, you must keep trying.动词不定式to succeed中间加了一个副词eventually，用来修饰不定式中的动词结构。这是一个非常让人困惑的用方法，通常我们被告知动词不定式是一个紧密的语法结构，但是在这里，他被修饰动词的副词分开了。to diligently readto happily writeto scientifically illustrate代词要与先行词保持一致要重视字母大小写（如you and I）句尾不要用介词动词要与主语保持一致不要使用双重否定不要使用分离不定式一、正确使用英语1.2成功写作十诫在英语语法中，动词不定式通过用to+动词的形式，去表示“打算”“计划”“希望”“将要做某事”等表示未来。例如：If you expect to eventually succeed, you must keep trying.动词不定式to succeed中间加了一个副词eventually，用来修饰不定式中的动词结构。这是一个非常让人困惑的用方法，通常我们被告知动词不定式是一个紧密的语法结构，但是在这里，他被修饰动词的副词分开了。to diligently