高考英语复习 读后续写 个人版范文圣诞节前夕的礼物.pptxVIP

高考英语写作之续写篇 kindness love help 三大主题 Content PART 01 谋篇布局 PART 02 遣词造句 PART 01 谋篇布局 原文细节1： Para 1 开门后发现不是圣诞老人 交流后，确认是我们的包裹 和女儿一起打开包裹 包裹里面是精美的礼物。 我们非常开心 Para 2 给女儿讲我和寄件人的故事 装饰圣诞树。 我们非常开心 忘记了目前的窘境 帮助别人就是帮助我们自己 原文细节2： PART 02 遣词造句 Para 1 开门后发现不是圣诞老人 动作描写 “动作链” 动作链描写： Having done…, sb. did…, did…and did…. But to her disappointment, having opened the door, she just looked at him, scratched her head and asked , “Are you sent by Santa Claus?” 开门后， 睁着大眼看着， 挠挠头 说 Para 1 交流后，确认是我们的包裹 语言描写 “先闻其声” “转场衔接”之“先闻其声”: “Yes, you are right! This is a gift from Santa Claus.” uttered the words in a gentle and confirmed voice. 通过“语言”、“声音”来进行场景的切换 Para 1 和女儿一起打开包裹 动作描写 “立即行动” “解决矛盾”之“立即行动”: 没有丝毫犹豫， 某人…… Without the slightest hesitation, sb did… Without the slightest hesitation, we started opening the present together with surprise, excitement and a little confusion. Para 1 包裹里面是精美的礼物。 心理+环境描写 “喜出望外 ” “正向结果”之“喜出望外”: Under no circumstance had we expected our Christmas to start with such a warm gift, with lovely dolls and colorful sweets in it. 某人绝不会料到，…会如此…… By no means/under no circumstance had sb. expected sth. to be so adj.… Para 1 我们非常开心 心理描写 Seeing the beautuful gift, we felt as if it had been smiling/winking its eyes, and saying softly, “ Merry Christmas!” 看到 Seeing sth, 某人感觉好像 Sb felt as if 它在 it had been doing… 并且说 and saying，“…” Para 2 给女儿讲我和寄件人的故事 情绪+动作描写 “情绪翻腾 ” After being told my story with the lady, Peggy understood the whole thing at once and felt a warm current welling up in her heart and surging through her. 某人感到一股强烈……在内心升腾、奔涌。 Sb. felt a great sense of + 情绪+ welling up in sb.’s heart and surging through sb. She fondly gathered me into her arms for she is proud of me. Para 2 装饰圣诞树。 动作描写 动作面 “动作面”描写: Before long, decorated with the lovely dolls and colorful sweets, a small Christmas tree was ready, shimmering with a unique beauty. 非谓语 + 谓语 + 非谓语/非限定从 Para 2 装饰圣诞树 心理+环境描写 “环境比喻 ” “环境描写”之“环境比喻”: