初中英语书面表达技巧(很有用)及练习题.pdf

【英语】初中英语书面表达技巧(很有用)及练习题 一、英语书面表达 1．写作 假定你是李华，在一位名叫Tiger Mom 的学生家长的博客上，你看到以下内容。请你根据 博客内容，写作要点和要求，给这位家长回复。 I’m the mother of a fourteen-year –old . I have a rule for my daughter :be among the top of 5 students or get punished in one way or another . She has been doing very well in school ,but some of my friends keep telling me that I put too much pressure on her .Am I wrong ? 1. 写作要点： 表明自己的看法。 2. 陈述自己的理由。 3. 2 提出至少 条建议。 Hi,TigerMom, 【答案】 What puzzles you is actually a puzzle for many parents in China.My idea is that it is not quite right for you to do so. Although high grades are an important factor in evaluating students and for their future university admission,development in wisdom,emotion,health,and life attitude should never be ignored. There are many examples around us. Some all-A students in school have turned out not to be as successful in society as they were expected. The reason is often that the pressure from their parents allows them almost no time for other activities. Furthermore,punishment is by no means a wise choice to help them grow up mentally and physically. So I suggest that you take your friends' advice. More importantly,let her live like a lovely girl let ； her have more friends and social activities；and let her make mistakes of her own as the teenagers often do. 【解析】 这是一篇给材料作文，对学生家长的博客进行回复。结合所给材料，可知本文主要考查一 般现在时态，人称为第一，三人称，注意主谓一致问题，句子结构主要为系表结构和动宾 My idea is that…… There are…… Some all-A 结构，注意一些常见句式的应用，比如： ， ， students in school have…….，The reason is……，So I suggest that……等句式的应用。写作中注 意运用代词，注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。 点睛：本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头表明自己的看法，接下来陈述自己的理由，最后介 绍自己的建议。此处turn out , by no means, help sb do sth, grow up, let sb do sth, make mistakes, of one’s own等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。 2 ．书面表达 “ ,