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上海名校2021年高二下试卷精选汇编——10.作文专题 上海市晋元中学2020-2021学年第二学期3月高二英语单元反馈练习 Ⅵ Guided Writing 66. Directions: Write an English composition in about150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 寒假中, 你所在的班级将进行一次市内徒步活动, 主题为“寻找上海的年味”, 班长正在征集方案, 请你写一封电子邮件描述你的设想。你的邮件必需包括： 1.活动具体时间和行走线路； 2.你的理由。 【答案】Dear Monitor, I am writing to you because I have an idea for this city hike that I hope you will adopt. We can meet at the library on Wednesday morning at eight o clock. Notice that everyones backpacks should be light, because well be hiking. Start with the Chenghuang Temple, where we can experience the traditional flavors and customs of Shanghai. Then go to Longhua Temple, make a wish on the wishing tree and ring the bell for blessing. At four o clock in the afternoon we leave for Yu Garden to see the beautiful lantern fair. Finally, we go to the Bund to listen to the New Year bell and shout the countdown together. I think we will experience the true flavor of Shanghai New Year by following this route. 【解析】 本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求考生给班长写封邮件，描述你对主题为“寻找上海的年味”的班级市内徒步活动的设想。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文 时态：根据提示，时态主要一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：总分法总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。 要求： 1.介绍活动具体时间和行走线路； 2.说明你的理由； 第二步：列提纲 （重点词组） meet at the library; start with the Chenghuang Temple; experience the traditional flavors and customs; go to Longhua Temple; make a wish; ring the bell for blessing; see the beautiful lantern fair; shout the countdown together 第三步：连词成句 1.I am writing to you because I have an idea for this city hike that I hope you will adopt. 2.We can meet at the library on Wednesday morning at eight o clock. 3.Notice that everyones backpacks should be light, because well be hiking. 4.Start with the Chenghuang Temple, where we can experience the traditional flavors and customs of Shanghai. 5.Then go to Longhua Temple, make a wish on the wishing tree and ring the bell for blessing. 6.At four o clock in the afternoon we leave for Yu Garden to see the beautiful lantern fair. 7.Finally, we go to the Bund