《Continuation writing 读后续写》公开课优秀课件（精品）.ppt

* * 乘着想象力的翅膀按照一定的路线飞翔 Continuation writing— How to describe emotions vividly and accurately What have you known about continuation writing? 读后续写要求：阅读一段语篇材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。 续写的三个原则：原文一致原则、正能量原则、曲折性原则 读后续写考察的能力：内容、语言表达和篇章结构 读后续写的步骤：read for elements read for plots gather ideas make predictions 读懂大意，理清脉络 细读首句，构思框架 增加细节，开始写作 修改润色，整洁誊写 读后续写第五档评分原则 档 次 描 述 第五档（21—25） — 与所给短文融洽度高，与所提供各段落开 头语衔接合理。 — 所使用语法结构和词汇丰富、准确，可能 有些许错误，但完全不会影响意义表达。 — 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所续 写短文结构紧凑。 *创造性+逻辑性+丰富性 rich & accurate 表达的丰富性和准确性 细节描写 —人物情感 emotion 是最正宗的情绪,情感.属于中性词.属于外界或者内心产生的精神层面的影响。Emotion is the complex psychological experience of an individual’s state of mind as interacting with biochemical (internal) and environmental (external) influences. 翻译(2016浙江卷) But?no?more?helicopters?came?and?it?was?dark.? 在可怕的黑暗中，传来了奇怪的野兽的声音。Jane感到非常孤单，极度恐慌。“要不是那场愚蠢的争吵，我就不会在这里了。”她懊悔地想，然后大哭了起来。许多次，Jane都处于崩溃的边缘。但最后她说服自己，并没有失去一切希望。Jane又累又饿，睡着了。 Translation： What you have been able to use： Heartbroken but fearless, I decided to turn everything around. Tears of joy welled up in their eyes. Her heart was thumping with excitement. I was caught in the sandess of failing an important exam and my world turned grey. The whole family was in deep sorrow at his death. B1 calm, concern, frighten, be tired of, grateful, loneliness, shock, upset B4 confuse, regret, depressed, content, astonish, bored, curious, frown, anger, yawn B5 delight, thrill, uncertain, exhausted, delighted, guilty, dilemma B3 sadness, weep, curiosity, glare, sign, stare, rude, scream, cheer up, terrify, terrified, pleased B6 bad-tempered, tough, breathless, desperate, disappointed, ashamed, embarrassed, awkward, unconscious, tremble, anxious, anxiety, panic happy glad joyful delighted excited... angry annoyed irritated mad... sad disappointed depressed frustrated upset... surprised amazed astonished shocked