高考英语作文写作万能模板.ppt

The number of the traffic accidents has been growing in recent years. As can be seen from the graph, in 2004 there occurred 570,000 traffic accidents, in which 109,000 people got killed. By October 2005, the number of the accidents reached 566,000 and 95,600 people lost their lives. While the number of the cars makes up only 2% of the total of the world, the rate of the deaths is 22%, making China a country with the highest death rate of traffic accidents in the world. The main reason why so many traffic accidents have happened is that the roads are too crowded and people ignore traffic rules. In order to reduce the traffic accidents, first, the government should take some proper measures, such as developing public traffics. Second, people should obey traffic rules, especially the drivers. Only when people have decided to take action will traffic problems be solved. According to chart 2, the students choices after graduation have presented a wider variety. Sixty percent of them intend to go to university. Thirty percent choose to enter vocational schools, and the rest ten percent plan to go abroad for further education. In conclusion, it seems clear that our city government has made more efforts to help the non-local workers, whose children can enjoy the equal right of a good education with the city students. * * * STEP4：检查全文，主要检查语法以及粗心犯下的错误。 STEP3：正式开始写作，整理思路成篇，行文连贯。 STEP2：确定内容要点，包括：主要人物、时间地点、重要细节、合理发挥等。 STEP1：确定文章框架，包括：时态、语态、格式、展开方式、开头结尾等。 ●高考英语作文完美行文四步骤 过渡性词语 表列举：for example、for instance、 that is to say表补充：besides、in addition、moreover表对比：on （the） one hand…on the other hand, in spite of表原因：because of、thanks to、due to、 owing to 、as a result of 表结果：therefore、thus、as a result、so表结论：to conclude、in a word、in brief、 to sum up表转折：however、nevertheless、yet 1. 正反观点题型 : 从正反两个方面来论证某一观点，对这类题型，时态一般用一般现在时。通常分为四个步骤来写： 第一段、文章开头，总述事件或情况 第二段、阐述提纲中列举的